A friend who is living overseas should visit you soon and would love to stay at your place. Write a letter and explain - Why cannot he/she stay at your place this time? - Suggest an alternative arrangement. - Invite him/her to stay in the future.
Dear Neha,
I hope
this
letter finds you in good health and high spirit
. I am delighted to hear that you are coming to stay with me at my home, but I would like to cut a sorry figure to share with you that the renovation work is going on at my home. You know very well my house is too small in size there is just two Fix the agreement mistake
spirits
bedroom
it is very difficult to Change to a plural noun
bedrooms
adjuct
10 members Correct your spelling
adjust
in
my house as my Change preposition
to
releatives
Correct your spelling
relatives
also
came here because of Diwali Celebration.
Further
adding here that I will book the hotel for you which is near to my home. I will also
stay with you. Moreover
, we will spend our maximum time
together and chit-chat with each other as we met together after long
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a long
time
.
I will invite you next time
at
my new house as I know that you like my mother's food. Change preposition
to
Besides
this
, you also
like to spend quality of
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apply
time
with my family.
I hope you would
be empathetic to enough comprehend the problem. Please don't forget Wrong verb form
will
topay
my regards to Correct your spelling
to pay
uncle
and aunt.
Correct pronoun usage
my uncle
Yours
love,
JasCorrect your spelling
Your
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Add more detail on the alternative arrangement suggestion to provide a complete response.
coherence cohesion
The greeting and closing parts of the letter are appropriate and friendly, establishing a warm tone.
task achievement
The writing tone throughout the letter is friendly and suits the purpose of the correspondence.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite