A friend who is living overseas should visit you soon and would love to stay at your place. Write a letter and explain - Why cannot he/she stay at your place this time? - Suggest an alternative arrangement. - Invite him/her to stay in the future.

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Dear Neha, I hope

this

letter finds you in good health and high

spirit

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. I am delighted to hear that you are coming to stay with me at my home, but I would like to cut a sorry figure to share with you that the renovation work is going on at my home. You know very well my house is too small in size there is just two

bedroom

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it is very difficult to

adjuct

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adjust

10 members

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my house as my

releatives

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relatives

also

came here because of Diwali Celebration.

Further

adding here that I will book the hotel for you which is near to my home. I will

also

stay with you.

Moreover

, we will spend our maximum

time

together and chit-chat with each other as we met together after

long

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time

. I will invite you next

time

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my new house as I know that you like my mother's food.

Besides

this

, you

also

like to spend quality

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time

with my family. I hope you

would

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be empathetic to enough comprehend the problem. Please don't forget

topay

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to pay

my regards to

uncle

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and aunt.

Yours

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love, Jas

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coherence cohesion

Make sure each paragraph focuses on a single main idea to enhance clarity.

task achievement

Add more detail on the alternative arrangement suggestion to provide a complete response.

coherence cohesion

The greeting and closing parts of the letter are appropriate and friendly, establishing a warm tone.

task achievement

The writing tone throughout the letter is friendly and suits the purpose of the correspondence.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
12
Grammar mistakes
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

189 words

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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