the graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular carriaban islamd between 2010 and 2017

the graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular carriaban islamd between 2010 and 2017
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The graphic illustrates between 2010-2017 the millions of
travellers
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on a specific Caribbean
island
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.
Overall
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, we can see the
number
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of visitors staying on cruise ships reached a peak in 2017;
however
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, it was the lowest point
number
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in 2012.
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, millions of guests are waiting on the
island
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, which had a higher
number
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of
travellers
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except after 2015 because 2015 cruise ship stayers increased slightly. If we look at the total
number
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of
travellers
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, it is rising but levelled out between 2015 and 2016. Cruise ship stayers merely saw the bottom in 2012;
otherwise
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, the
number
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of visitors had improved, so we can say that in 2012, most people were interested in staying on the
island
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instead
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of resting on the ship.
Additionally
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, after 2012, the
number
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of guests on the
island
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was unchanged until 2015; afterwards, it fluctuated. Those unstable proportions affect the total of millions of
travellers
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words travellers, island, number with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
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