the graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular carriaban islamd between 2010 and 2017

the graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular carriaban islamd between 2010 and 2017
The graphic illustrates between 2010-2017 the millions of
travellers
on a specific Caribbean
island
.
Overall
, we can see the
number
of visitors staying on cruise ships reached a peak in 2017;
however
, it was the lowest point
number
in 2012.
Also
, millions of guests are waiting on the
island
, which had a higher
number
of
travellers
except after 2015 because 2015 cruise ship stayers increased slightly. If we look at the total
number
of
travellers
, it is rising but levelled out between 2015 and 2016. Cruise ship stayers merely saw the bottom in 2012;
otherwise
, the
number
of visitors had improved, so we can say that in 2012, most people were interested in staying on the
island
instead
of resting on the ship.
Additionally
, after 2012, the
number
of guests on the
island
was unchanged until 2015; afterwards, it fluctuated. Those unstable proportions affect the total of millions of
travellers
.
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