The graph below shows the differences in the consumption of three fast food among Australian teenager. Write a report describing the information shown below. Write at least 150 words.

The graph below shows the differences in the consumption of three fast food among Australian teenager. 

Write a report describing the information shown below. Write at least 150 words.
The line graph compares data about fast food consumed by teenagers in Australia between 1975 and 2000.
Overall
, it can be seen that
Hamburger
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and pizza experienced an increase,
while
fish and chips
droped
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dropped
.
To begin
with
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in 1975
amount
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the amount
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of time fish and chips was equal to 100. It decreased
just
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under 80 in 1980 and showed a tiny
rose
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to just under 100 . There was an incredible decrease to 40 in 2000. Consumption of hamburger was just under 20. There was
significant
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increase to 80 in the next decade and grew to 100. Regarding
to
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Pizza in 1975
teenegers
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teenagers
ate approximately 8 pizzas.
Afterwards
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the number of people who
eat
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ate
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pizza increased dramatically to just over 80 in the
2000 year
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time period between 1975 and 1995.
Then
the figure levelled off
about
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to just over 80 until 2000.
By
contrast
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consumption of
hamburger
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hamburgers
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experienced an increase between 1975 and 1985.In 1985, approximately 84 hamburgers were eaten.
However
,
this
trend slowed down and reached 100 in 1995.Afterwards, the trend was reminded until 2000.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "just over" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "just under" was used 3 times.
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