The graph below shows the differences in the consumption of three fast food among Australian teenager. Write a report describing the information shown below. Write at least 150 words.
The line graph compares data about fast food consumed by teenagers in Australia between 1975 and 2000.
Overall
, it can be seen that Hamburger
and pizza experienced an increase, Fix the agreement mistake
Hamburgers
while
fish and chips droped
.
Correct your spelling
dropped
To begin
with
in 1975 Add a comma
with,
amount
of time fish and chips was equal to 100. It decreased Correct article usage
the amount
just
under 80 in 1980 and showed a tiny Change preposition
to just
rose
to just under 100 . There was an incredible decrease to 40 in 2000. Consumption of hamburger was just under 20. There was Replace the word
rise
significant
increase to 80 in the next decade and grew to 100. Regarding Add an article
a significant
to
Pizza in 1975 Remove the preposition
apply
teenegers
ate approximately 8 pizzas.Correct your spelling
teenagers
Afterwards
the number of people who Add a comma
Afterwards,
eat
pizza increased dramatically to just over 80 in the Wrong verb form
ate
2000 year
time period between 1975 and 1995.Add a hyphen
2000-year
Then
the figure levelled off about
to just over 80 until 2000.
Change preposition
apply
By
contrast
consumption of Add a comma
contrast,
hamburger
experienced an increase between 1975 and 1985.In 1985, approximately 84 hamburgers were eaten.Fix the agreement mistake
hamburgers
However
, this
trend slowed down and reached 100 in 1995.Afterwards, the trend was reminded until 2000.Submitted by makemoneyizzy16 on
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Vocabulary: The word "just over" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "just under" was used 3 times.
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