You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The pie chart shows the online sales for retail sectors in Canada in the year 2019 & 2020. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant write at least 150 words

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The charts provide key information about online products in Canada from year 2019 to 2020. The units are measured in proportion.

Overall

, it is clear from the graph that electronics & applications were at their peak in 2019.

In addition

, video games declined by about 5% from 2019 to 2020,

whereas

food & beverage increased by almost 10% between 2019 and 2020.

According to

what is shown,

the

Correct article usage

apply

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home furnishings decreased by 10%

Correct pronoun usage

which

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was a huge plummet. In general, all of the products were increased except the home furnishings and electronics & appliances. In terms of food & beverage and electronics & applications were so close to each other in 2020 but, the home furnishings were lower than video games almost 10%.

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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The pie chart shows the online sales for retail sectors in Canada in the year 2019 & 2020. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant write at least 150 words

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