You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The pie chart shows the online sales for retail sectors in Canada in the year 2019 & 2020. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant write at least 150 words
The charts provide key information about online products in Canada from year 2019 to 2020. The units are measured in proportion.
Overall
, it is clear from the graph that electronics & applications were at their peak in 2019. In addition
, video games declined by about 5% from 2019 to 2020, whereas
food & beverage increased by almost 10% between 2019 and 2020.
According to
what is shown, the
home furnishings decreased by 10% Correct article usage
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was a huge plummet. In general, all of the products were increased except the home furnishings and electronics & appliances.
In terms of food & beverage and electronics & applications were so close to each other in 2020 but, the home furnishings were lower than video games almost 10%.Correct pronoun usage
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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