You have recently attended a job interview and have been offered the job. Write a letter to the company accepting the job offer, and provide details about when you will be able to start and any other information you think they may need.

Dear Mr Manager, Thank you for taking the time to schedule a meeting with me yesterday. I enjoyed our conversation about the Data Analyst position and appreciated the information about my team.
This
role provides opportunities for collaboration and advancement. I reckon my Masters degree in foreign languages from People’s Ukrainian Academy and more than four years of experience would make me an excellent candidate for
this
role. I hereby formally accept the offered vacancy and the associated terms of employment stated in the offer letter. I look forward to joining your company and meeting the team on the 25th of
this
month. Let me know if there are any additional formalities to be completed before the joining date. Feel free to contact me if you require any
further
information, you can reach me by e-mail at LYKKA at ukr.net or on my mobile at 380-959230574. Thank you for
this
opportunity, yours sincerely, Liudmyla Berezhynsks
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Ensure that all contact details are formatted consistently, for example, using a standard format for the phone number.
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Consider providing a bit more detail about the position or the company to further personalize the acceptance.
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Check for any small typos or inconsistencies in the text.
task achievement
The letter uses a professional and polite tone throughout, which is very appropriate for an acceptance letter.
coherence and cohesion
The letter follows a clear structure with a beginning, middle, and end, making it easy to follow the writer's intentions.
coherence and cohesion
The greeting and closing of the letter are appropriately formal and courteous.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • gratitude
  • acceptance
  • position offered
  • start date
  • flexibility
  • documentation
  • enthusiasm
  • commitments
  • contribute
  • team
  • offer letter
  • employment contract
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