The internet has put everyone on the map and certainly revolutionized the idea of shopping. What could be the negative consequences of this trend and its reasonable solution?

There is no denying the fact that the internet has put everyone on the map and especially revolutionised the idea of shopping.

This

essay will discuss the side effects of

this

trend

as well as

if it is a reasonable solution.

To begin

with, nowadays with the new

technology

a

lot

of

things

have changed,

therefore

, a

lot

of

people

preferred

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prefer

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to be online and use

this

technology

to buy and sell their

staff

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stuff

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since it is easier for them than going to markets and

spend

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spending

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some time.

For instance

, survey results have been published about online shopping and why it is helpful for

people

, and most of the answers were that

people

found it much easier than travelling to local shops.

In addition

,

people

believe that online shopping become cheaper than

shop

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shopping

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.

For example

, a

lot

of internet pages advertise that the are many discounts in the next few days which

made

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makes

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people

think it is a good chance to buy these

things

from the websites

instead

of the markets. In terms of how

this

trend will be negatively impacted because of

this

habit, the community itself will suffer a

lot

due to

this

decision. To clarify, if

people

usually buy their

things

online and avoid local shops that will cost the owners a

lot

of money loss.

In addition

, another consequence might exist which is spending your income without focusing on the

things

that you are going to buy

it

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apply

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.

For example

, many

people

liked

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like

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how

technology

helped

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helps

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them to pay in

easy

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an easy

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way and

this

thing lead to a

lot

of spending money

while

people

do not feel that they spend some of it. In conclusion,

internet

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the internet

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revolution has helped

people

to

shopping

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shop

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online. It is

also

possible to say that

this

technology

has some

of

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apply

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the

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apply

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negative consequences

while

there is no reasonable solution

in

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for

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the time being.