The two maps below show the site of a college in 2006 and the present day. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The two maps below depict some information about changes that have been done on the
college
site between 2006 and the present day.
Overall
, it is clearly classified that many changes such
as adding and demolishing buildings made on the Lynwich College
site. In addition
, they expanded and decreased the areas of some buildings, whereas
they changed the purpose of some areas.
According to
the maps, it is interesting to notice on the left side; they added the library between college
buildings one and two, and they constructed the cafeteria in the middle and connected it with a new path from the road.
Turning to the right side, the college
site faced many developments such
as adding bus
stop area near the car park, and they built bike storage on the right side. Correct article usage
a bus
In contrast
, they expanded the area of the old library and changed it to a sport
Change the noun form
sports
center
, Change the spelling
centre
while
they decreased the area of the sport
field, and constructed new paths.Change the noun form
sports
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