The two maps below show the site of a college in 2006 and the present day. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps below show the site of a college in 2006 and the present day.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The two maps below depict some information about changes that have been done on the
college
site between 2006 and the present day.
Overall
, it is clearly classified that many changes
such
as adding and demolishing buildings made on the Lynwich
College
site.
In addition
, they expanded and decreased the areas of some buildings,
whereas
they changed the purpose of some areas.
According to
the maps, it is interesting to notice on the left side; they added the library between
college
buildings one and two, and they constructed the cafeteria in the middle and connected it with a new path from the road. Turning to the right side, the
college
site faced many developments
such
as adding
bus
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stop area near the car park, and they built bike storage on the right side.
In contrast
, they expanded the area of the old library and changed it to a
sport
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sports
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center
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centre
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,
while
they decreased the area of the
sport
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sports
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field, and constructed new paths.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "such".
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 83%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words college with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • underwent significant changes
  • consisted of
  • large open space
  • utilized
  • relocated
  • limited facilities and amenities
  • wider range of facilities and amenities
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