The two maps illustrate the changes of a school campus from 1985 to 2012. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The two maps illustrate the changes of a school campus from 1985 to 2012. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The given maps demonstrate alternatives that happened for a School between 1985 and 2012.
Overall
, it was important that the number of students, facilities, and vegetation increased over the period of 27 years.
According to
the pictures, the
car
park
, in the north of the area which shaped changed in 2012 from the prior and the Office, in the north-west, had the same position as previous.
Last
time, at the bottom of the
car
park
, we can see the road, connecting the
car
park
to the Playing ground, the library and the
car
park
, in the west, and the classroom block of 2 storeys;
thereafter
, they were replaced by the resource computer room, in the wast, the green region, in the centre, and the classroom block of 3 storeys. The graphs show that at the
last
time,
this
institute had a large playing field in the south after that, it was divided by the 2 classrooms, the swimming pool and fitness club, in the west, and a smaller playing field, in the east.
In addition
, the number of students who studied in
this
place climbed from 1500 to 2300 in 2012.
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