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The two maps illustrate the changes of a school campus from 1985 to 2012. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps illustrate the changes of a school campus from 1985 to 2012. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given maps demonstrate alternatives that happened for a School between 1985 and 2012.
Overall
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, it was important that the number of students, facilities, and vegetation increased over the period of 27 years.
According to
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 the pictures, the
car
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park
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, in the north of the area which shaped changed in 2012 from the prior and the Office, in the north-west, had the same position as previous.
Last
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 time, at the bottom of the
car
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park
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, we can see the road, connecting the
car
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park
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 to the Playing ground, the library and the
car
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park
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, in the west, and the classroom block of 2 storeys;
thereafter
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, they were replaced by the resource computer room, in the wast, the green region, in the centre, and the classroom block of 3 storeys. The graphs show that at the
last
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 time,
this
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 institute had a large playing field in the south after that, it was divided by the 2 classrooms, the swimming pool and fitness club, in the west, and a smaller playing field, in the east.
In addition
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, the number of students who studied in
this
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 place climbed from 1500 to 2300 in 2012.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last".
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words car, park with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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