The pie graph below shows how electricity is produced in Ireland and the table shows the primary reasons for using electricity in the same country.
The two given graphs illustrate valuable information about the production of
electricity
in Ireland, and also
five major consumption sources of this
energy
. As it is evident there are four electricity
-producing resources: coal, gas, wind, and solar.
Based on the pie graph coal is the main energy
-producing material allocating nearly half of the production to itself. The second place goes to gas which is crucial for producing more than one-third of the energy
. Wind and Solar energy
contribute to electricity
production equally which is 10%.
Regarding the reasons for electricity
usage, heating is considered the primary one using more than half of the electricity
. Furthermore
, lighting and kitchen appliances consume 20% and 15% of the power. the lowest consumption rates belong to consumer electronics and phone charging which is 5% for both.
To sum up
, based on the given charts coal and solar energy
are the main electricity
-producing sources. Moreover
, the primary electricity
-consuming devices are heating and lighting, and kitchen appliances.Submitted by basri.fateme on
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