An old friend is coming to town and has invited you to go to the cinema. Write to your friend. In your letter • Explain that you are unable to come • Find out how long your friend is staying in town • Arrange a suitable time to meet

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Dear Maninder, I hope

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letter finds you in the best of spirits and radiant health. Yesterday, I got your invitation to watch a movie together, I would like to thank you for it, but I regret I can't come. As

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annual business event has come up, which is important for me to attend, because I am expecting a job promotion. I am glad to hear that you have come home after five long years. I hope you will be staying here for a

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, in order to, spend some quality time with your family and friends. I wonder if you could tell

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duration

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the duration

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of your stay in Ludhiana, which would enable me to meet you. If

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it is convenient

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you we can meet next week. As I will be on leave from my work for three days. I again apologise to you for not coming to the cinema. I hope you will like

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new plan and I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours lovingly, Jatinder.

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coherence cohesion

Break the second paragraph into two separate paragraphs to clearly distinguish between individual questions and proposed plans.

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The greeting and closing are appropriate and show politeness.

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The tone of the letter is friendly and suitable for writing to a friend.

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The letter addresses all parts of the prompt: explaining inability to attend, asking about the stay duration, and suggesting a new meeting time.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

172 words

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