The graph below compares changes in the birth rates of china and the USA between 1920 and 2000

The graph below compares changes in the birth rates of china and the USA between 1920 and 2000
The line graph compares the
USA
and
China
in terms of the number of live births in 1,000 women from 1920 to 2000.
Overall
, the
USA
had the highest
birth
rate
throughout most of the period, with
China
overtaking the
USA
in 1935 and 1950. In 1920, the
birth
rate
was over 10% in both countries. In fifteen years,
China
's
birth
rate
surpassed the United States of America, with a sharp rise to 15%,
while
the figure remained unchanged in the
USA
.
Afterward
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, the
rate
of
birth
in
China
decreased noticeably to one-twentieth in 1940 and plateaued for the following five years. From 1945 onward, the
USA
's and
China
's
birth
rates steeply increased to peak at one-fifth and under 15% in 1952 respectively. Post-1952, both countries witnessed a downward trend, with
China
's
rate
of
birth
bottoming down at under 5% by the end of the period. The
USA
's
birth
rate
,
on the other hand
, witnessed a more moderate decline, to well over 5% in 2000.
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  • birth rate
  • demographics
  • population control policy
  • One-Child Policy
  • Baby Boom
  • fertility rate
  • census data
  • fluctuations
  • societal norms
  • economic prosperity
  • Great Leap Forward
  • family planning
  • contraception
  • workforce participation
  • aging population
  • urbanization
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