The graph below compares changes in the birth rates of china and the USA between 1920 and 2000

The graph below compares changes in the birth rates of china and the USA between 1920 and 2000
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The line graph compares the
USA
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and
China
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in terms of the number of live births in 1,000 women from 1920 to 2000.
Overall
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, the
USA
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had the highest
birth
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rate
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throughout most of the period, with
China
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overtaking the
USA
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in 1935 and 1950. In 1920, the
birth
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rate
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was over 10% in both countries. In fifteen years,
China
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's
birth
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rate
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surpassed the United States of America, with a sharp rise to 15%,
while
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the figure remained unchanged in the
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.
Afterward
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, the
rate
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of
birth
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in
China
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decreased noticeably to one-twentieth in 1940 and plateaued for the following five years. From 1945 onward, the
USA
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's and
China
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's
birth
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rates steeply increased to peak at one-fifth and under 15% in 1952 respectively. Post-1952, both countries witnessed a downward trend, with
China
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's
rate
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of
birth
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bottoming down at under 5% by the end of the period. The
USA
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's
birth
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rate
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,
on the other hand
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, witnessed a more moderate decline, to well over 5% in 2000.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words usa, china, birth, rate with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "compares" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • birth rate
  • demographics
  • population control policy
  • One-Child Policy
  • Baby Boom
  • fertility rate
  • census data
  • fluctuations
  • societal norms
  • economic prosperity
  • Great Leap Forward
  • family planning
  • contraception
  • workforce participation
  • aging population
  • urbanization
  • trend analysis
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