The graph below compares changes in the birth rates of china and the USA between 1920 and 2000
The line graph compares the
USA
and China
in terms of the number of live births in 1,000 women from 1920 to 2000.
Overall
, the USA
had the highest birth
rate
throughout most of the period, with China
overtaking the USA
in 1935 and 1950.
In 1920, the birth
rate
was over 10% in both countries. In fifteen years, China
's birth
rate
surpassed the United States of America, with a sharp rise to 15%, while
the figure remained unchanged in the USA
. Afterward
, the Change the spelling
Afterwards
rate
of birth
in China
decreased noticeably to one-twentieth in 1940 and plateaued for the following five years.
From 1945 onward, the USA
's and China
's birth
rates steeply increased to peak at one-fifth and under 15% in 1952 respectively. Post-1952, both countries witnessed a downward trend, with China
's rate
of birth
bottoming down at under 5% by the end of the period. The USA
's birth
rate
, on the other hand
, witnessed a more moderate decline, to well over 5% in 2000.Submitted by ghazalmoosavi79 on
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