The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040.

The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population

in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for

2030 and 2040.
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The chart illustrates essential information about tenants living in the cities in four different Asian towns from 1970 to 2020. The years 2020 to 2040 are based on predictions.
This
unit is measured on percentages.
Overall
, it is clear from the graph that the Malaysian
population
has the majority of living in cities. Unlike Thailand's
population
, which has fewer humans living in cities.
According to
what is shown, Malaysian citizens had 30% in the beginning and grew massively to nearly 80% in 2020, and there is a possibility that the Philippines
population
will increase to 90% in the year 2024.
On the other hand
, Thailand's citizens living in towns started from 19% in 1970 and grew moderately to 30% in 2020; there is a chance to grow again in the future. In terms of the Philippine's
population
, it grew from 30% to 50% and reached its peak in 1990, after that it fell and reached nearly 45% in 2020. it will increase again in the future and will stand for 50%.
Moreover
, Indonesia's
population
stand in second place above Thailand and the Philippines after it was the lowest in 1970. Indonesia started at 13% and grew dramatically to 50% in 2020; there is a chance to grow again and reach 63%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words population with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stand" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • graph
  • percentage
  • population
  • Asian countries
  • living in cities
  • 1970
  • 2020
  • predictions
  • 2030
  • 2040
  • introduction
  • overview
  • trend
  • body paragraph
  • compare
  • predicted percentages
  • summarize
  • closing statement
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