The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040.

The graph provides information on the

percentage

of the

population

in four Asian countries namely the Philippines, Malaysia,

Thailand

, and Indonesia living in

Cities

from 1970 to 2040.

Overall

, it is

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that Malaysia is at the top of the chart from other countries.

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Thailand

has a lower the

percentage

of

population

living in

cities

. In terms of the

population

, Malaysia's

population

had 30% in the beginning, and

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massively to around 84% in 2040. And Indonesia stood in second position.

This

country will gradually rise from starting it had 12% in 1970

then

slowly increase and reach nearly 62% in 2040. The

percentage

of Indonesia's peak is almost above 60. For the remaining

percentage

of the

population

, The Philippines

population

lived in

cities

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32% in the beginning

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1970. The Philippines'

population

living in

cities

fluctuated many times.

Moreover

, it ultimately increases from 30% to nearly 55% in 2040.

On the other hand

,

Thailand

's

population

was the lowest among the above countries. In 1970,

Thailand

's

population

had in

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19

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%.From next year it will increase by approximately 50% in the year 2040.