The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040.
The graph provides information on the
percentage
of the population
in four Asian countries namely the Philippines, Malaysia, Thailand
, and Indonesia living in Cities
from 1970 to 2040.
Overall
, it is clean
that Malaysia is at the top of the chart from other countries. Correct your spelling
clear
While
,
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Thailand
has a lower the percentage
of population
living in cities
.
In terms of the population
, Malaysia's population
had 30% in the beginning, and increase
massively to around 84% in 2040. And Indonesia stood in second position. Wrong verb form
increased
This
country will gradually rise from starting it had 12% in 1970 then
slowly increase and reach nearly 62% in 2040. The percentage
of Indonesia's peak is almost above 60.
For the remaining percentage
of the population
, The Philippines population
lived in cities
approximately
32% in the beginning Change preposition
at approximately
in
1970. The Philippines' Change preposition
of
population
living in cities
fluctuated many times. Moreover
, it ultimately increases from 30% to nearly 55% in 2040. On the other hand
, Thailand
's population
was the lowest among the above countries. In 1970, Thailand
's population
had in
Verb problem
was
the
close Correct article usage
apply
19
%.From next year it will increase by approximately 50% in the year 2040.Change preposition
to 19
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