Million of dollars are spent on space research every year. Some people argue that the money should be spent on improving living standards on Earth. Do you agree or disagree?

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While

some people argue that money spent on

projects

related to outer

space

is waste,

instead

these funds need to be utilized to solve the problems of the

Earth

itself. I completely disagree with

this

, because

such

advanced research has not only helped us in developing technologies like wireless communication, weather forecasting etc. But

also

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it can

also

be used to build a habitable community on other planets if the

Earth

is under threat of mass extinction.

Firstly

I believe, that communication through the Internet, natural disaster prediction, and GPS technology has really made our life easy and

this

is all because of satellites which were designed under

space

projects

. These advancements have ensured that everyone is connected if there is any cyclone we are given a warning in advance, and with the help of maps we can reach our destination.

For example

, Google Maps uses a GPS system to know our position and

then

assist us in reaching our desired location within the shortest time.

Hence

such

research is very much needed to improve and safeguard our lives.

Secondly

, with

such

projects

, we can

also

construct a new home outside our planet.

That is

when

Earth

is under the threat of mass extinction we can translocate a few organisms outside the

Earth

so that humanity continues.

For Instance

Space

X a company formed by Elon Musk, believes that in a few 100 years,

Earth

will become inhabitable, so he started to build spacecraft so that he could transport people to Mars

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because it is one of the best alternative planets available. In conclusion, I completely argue against not allocating funds for

space

agencies that build

projects

to improve the standard of living.

In addition

, it

also

tries to save us from any mass extinction by figuring out other alternatives.

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living standards
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