Million of dollars are spent on space research every year. Some people argue that the money should be spent on improving living standards on Earth. Do you agree or disagree?

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some people argue that money spent on

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related to outer

space

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is waste,

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these funds need to be utilized to solve the problems of the

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itself. I completely disagree with

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, because

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advanced research has not only helped us in developing technologies like wireless communication, weather forecasting etc. But

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it can

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be used to build a habitable community on other planets if the

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is under threat of mass extinction.

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I believe, that communication through the Internet, natural disaster prediction, and GPS technology has really made our life easy and

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is all because of satellites which were designed under

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projects

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. These advancements have ensured that everyone is connected if there is any cyclone we are given a warning in advance, and with the help of maps we can reach our destination.

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, Google Maps uses a GPS system to know our position and

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assist us in reaching our desired location within the shortest time.

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research is very much needed to improve and safeguard our lives.

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, with

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, we can

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construct a new home outside our planet.

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when

Earth

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is under the threat of mass extinction we can translocate a few organisms outside the

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so that humanity continues.

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Space

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X a company formed by Elon Musk, believes that in a few 100 years,

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will become inhabitable, so he started to build spacecraft so that he could transport people to Mars

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because it is one of the best alternative planets available. In conclusion, I completely argue against not allocating funds for

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agencies that build

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to improve the standard of living.

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, it

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tries to save us from any mass extinction by figuring out other alternatives.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

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Task Achievement: 7.0

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Relevant & specific examples

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4 paragraphs

300 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

space exploration
technological advancements
scientific discoveries
astronomy
satellites
international collaboration
economic benefits
living standards
infrastructure
education
healthcare
poverty reduction
distribute funds
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