Some parents buy their children a large number of toys to play with. what are the advantages and disadvantages for the child having a large number of toys? Give your opinion on this.

In childhood

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like

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toys

to play with. There are numerous pros and cons for the

child

having a copious amount of

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. I concur that

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only with

toys

can be a barrier

in

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holistic

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development of children.

This

essay will shed light on the reasons in upcoming paragraphs.

To begin

with,

to buy

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gazillions of

toys

for

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, can be

a

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easy way for

parents

to handle stubborn children. Apart

form

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from

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this

, having a full range of

toys

child

is not demanding any other things which is extremely beneficial for

full time

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parents

as well as

they can escape from spending time with

child

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their child

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situation with the help of

this

.

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, a study

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that 80% of

parents

buys

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a million

of

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apply

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toys

for their little ones because they want to

be

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them busy in the circle,

therefore

, they can easily manage their hectic

shedule

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schedule

.

However

, it is not good and

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for

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child

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children

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overall

growth and they

always

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stuck in only

toys

.

Moreover

,

due to

this

,

adolscents

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adolescents

will not be able to develop any other

interest

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like drawing, playing video games,

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in any other

extra curriculum

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extracurricular

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activities so on.

Also

, to stay only

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with

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toys

affect their mind growth as they will become less active and they will not have been

enthusiam

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enthusiasm

towards any other activities. What is more, it can be costly for

parents

also

to

purchage

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purchase

plently

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plenty

of

toys

.

Hence

, it leads to

exaggerate

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the

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expanses

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expenses

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.

To conclude

, in my view,

to buy

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a great number of

toys

for

child

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a child

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can be harmful

for

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to

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their physical, mental, and personal growth. It should be

in limit

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so that they can get

chance

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to explore and develop their interest in other things

also