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The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014

The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014
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The line graph illustrates the median monthly
change
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 in the costs of three metals during 2014. In January, the
change
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 in the price of nickel was the highest compared to two other countries which was about 6%. It experienced a massive decrease until the sixth month and touched the lowest at -3%.
Afterward
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, the value of nickel boosted slightly to around -1% in July
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 it did not
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 until September. In the following month, it experienced a small decline and climbed up sharply until November, which was approximately 1% and had the same percentage until the end of the period.
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, the transformation in the fee of
zinc
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 was the lowest among
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 countries which was about 1%,
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 it rose by 2% in February. From February to June, the price of
zinc
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 dropped rapidly to around -1%.
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, it increased by 0.5% and the number of transformations in the cost of
zinc
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 did not transform until September. In October, it reduced by -1% and surged to approximately 1% and did not
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 until December. The
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 in the price of copper dipped dramatically from January to Mei which is under 0% until June.
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, it experienced a slight increase to approximately 1% and had
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 stable chart until September. In October, the transformation in the value of
zinc
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 was under 1% and remained until November. In the following month, the cost of copper boosted up to 1.5%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words change, zinc with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "change" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 5 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • average monthly change
  • prices of metals
  • trend
  • spike
  • fluctuation
  • increase
  • decrease
  • sharp rise
  • sharp fall
  • stability
  • volatility
  • data points
  • comparison
  • contrast
  • external factors
  • influences
  • market dynamics
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