You are living in a rented apastment in an English speaking country. You are facing some prablem in the kitchen. Write a letterto a friend, describing the problems in the Kitchen and ask him/hes how to fix.

Dear Neha, I hope
this
letter finds you in good health and high spirits.
This
is to write about a dissatisfaction with the kitchen in a rented apartment. Please tell me some solutions so that
this
problem can be
stemmed out
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resolved
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. The first issue is that the stove is not heating up properly, takes a
alot
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lot
a lot
of time to cook even the simplest meal. You know I have
sedentary
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the sedentary
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lifestyle I do not have much time. On
the
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apply
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top of
that
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that,
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the sink is draining very slowly
although
I
try
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tried
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drain cleaner
but
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it did not
fixed
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fix
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the obstacle. Since you have
experience
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the experience
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to live
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of living
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in
such
kind of apartments. Kindly tell me some ideas to resolve
this
issue. I really appreciate
if
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it if
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you help me. Looking Forward for a positive and prompt response from your side.
Your
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Yours
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truly, Jas
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task achievement
Try to address each problem separately and provide more context for each issue. For example, mention how long the issue has been occurring or what efforts you have already made to fix it, such as contacting the landlord.
coherence cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph focuses on a single issue or idea. This helps in maintaining clarity and makes it easier for the reader to follow your points.
task achievement
You've clearly stated the problems you're facing, namely the stove not heating properly and the sink draining slowly. This directly responds to the task.
coherence cohesion
The greeting and closing of your letter are appropriately used, giving a personal touch to your communication.
coherence cohesion
There is a logical flow in addressing the problems and your request for advice. You successfully transitioned from stating the issues to asking for help.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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