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The chart below provides information about the 5 types of transportation that tourists used in a particular city between 1989 and 2009. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The chart below provides information about the 5 types of transportation that tourists used in a particular city between 1989 and 2009. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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This
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 line graph depicts a comparison
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 five types of public transport in a particular country. It is measured by numbers in percentages from 1989 to 2009.
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, it can be clearly seen that there was an increasing trend for most of them. Rail was the greatest rise in the number of tourists.
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,
ferry
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the ferry
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 was the lowest over the years.
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 the given data in the following graph, rail started
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 33% in 1989. It increased dramatically to reach a peak of 59% in 2009. It was the highest point in all sections.
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, tourists who used air began with 38% in 1989. They dropped rapidly to end up with 21%.
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, cars started with 49%. They increased gently until 1999
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 they decreased to reach 51%.
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, both coach and ferry were nearly similar in the number of people. They started with ( 9 -5) respectively in 1989. They rose slowly to end up with ( 25-9) respectively in 2009.

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