The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now.

The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and

how it looks now.
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The map illustrates key information about the differences in the local
library
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's appearance in the present and 20 years ago and demonstrates the developments.
Overall
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, it is clear from the graph that every single
room
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on the floor plan has changed over time.
According to
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what is shown, the old reading
room
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, which contained ( newspapers and magazines ) has become a computer
room
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in the meantime, and the door has changed to the opposite side near the entrance gate.
On the other hand
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, the enquiry desk has been converted into a cafe and enlarged.
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, tables and chairs were in the middle of the map, and they were demolished today. Next to the new cafe is the adult fiction
books
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library
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; they added 3 new self-service machines and an information desk. In terms of the children’s
books
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library
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, they remake it into a lecture
room
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without changing the size of the specific
room
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.
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, on the opposite side of the lecture
room
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is the old video games
room
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. They enlarge the
room
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and redevelop it into a children’s fiction
books
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library
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. Just below the
room
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, there were the adult fiction
books
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, and they made them into all-reference
books
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words library, room, books with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • floor plan
  • layout
  • shelving
  • reading area
  • reference section
  • encyclopedias
  • dictionaries
  • circulation desk
  • transactions
  • digital media
  • computer stations
  • multimedia rooms
  • café area
  • social environment
  • leisure-friendly
  • expanded reading areas
  • user experience
  • comfortable seating
  • children's section
  • engage younger readers
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