In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advatantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

As the technological advancement is surging. The
World
is becoming a new place with something new each day.
Such
as America can be seen witnessing driverless
cars
and taxis already.
Also
, many researchers say that the whole
world
will be going to experience
cars
, trucks and all other
vehicles
without any human drivers in upcoming years. As soon as
this
came into
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, various
people
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happy about the pros, they
can
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have all over the
world
.
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I believe, it is going to have a lot of loopholes too. Even though,
vehicles
without
driver
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are going to be advantageous as there will be no need for
people
to drive. They can just sleep or do anything when the self-driving
vehicles
are doing
there
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their
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work. But taking disadvantages
lightlly
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lightly
would be a bad idea.
Hence
there is
need
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to look
on
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loopholes too.
Firstly
, these advanced
vehicles
can bring a lot of unemployment to
world
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. As
people
who use driving as their skill and earn by driving
uber
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,
trucks
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and trucks
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, they are going to have
setback
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setbacks
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.
For example
,
last
week I read news that about more than 50,000
people
all around
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Canada are estimated to lose
the
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job
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jobs
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as
driver
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drivers
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because of self-driving
cars
.
Moreover
,
cars
without drivers would definitely become
problem
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a problem
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in
country
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a country
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like Canada
as
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because of weather
condition
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conditions
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. As in
snow
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the snow
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season, these automobiles will not be able to work as
appropriate
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appropriately
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as human minds react to
particular
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a particular
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situation
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situations
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and there is
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a possibilty
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possibilty
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possibility
of
engine
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stop
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working in severe
weathr
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weather
.
For instance
, in
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American,
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American
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America
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only, about more than 10,000 Tesla self-driving
cars
were recalled as they were proved to be unsafe and
unfuncationable
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unfunctional
in snowy weather. In conclusion, it can be said, there are more cons than pros of
robot operated
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vehicles
. That signifies that there is still
need
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of
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for
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more modification and advancement
untill
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until
pros
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the pros
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outweighs
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outweigh
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cons
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the cons
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.
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coherence cohesion
Ensure that each paragraph focuses on a single main idea to improve clarity. For example, separate the discussion of weather-related disadvantages from employment impacts.
task achievement
Include more specific examples and evidence to support your points, such as statistics or studies that predict the future impact of driverless cars.
task achievement
Refine the introduction by clearly stating your thesis (whether advantages outweigh disadvantages), which will help to focus your essay's argument.
task achievement
The essay provides a balanced viewpoint, discussing both advantages and disadvantages.
coherence cohesion
A clear introduction and conclusion are present, giving the essay a complete structure.
task achievement
Attempts to use examples such as the impact on Canadian jobs add depth to the discussion.

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