The table below shows information about the population of New Zealand from 2011 to 2012 by age group.

The table below shows information about the population of New Zealand from 2011 to 2012 by age group.
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The given table shows the information about the population of New Zealand in two different aspects: numbers and percentage changes, broken down into four different
age
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group
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groups
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from 2011 to 2012.
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, it can be clearly observed that the majority of
New
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the New
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zealand
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Zealand
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populations
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population
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were primarily
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adolescents
adolescent
and young adults,
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that
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apply
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of
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the minority
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children and
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the elderlys
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elderlys
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elderly
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.
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, it is interesting to note that the seniors with
age
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above 65 experienced
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the largest
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growth over a year.
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with, a closer look at the table
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that figures
of
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for
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each
demographics
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demographic
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had similar trends on average in both years. It is noticeable that in 2011, at roughly 1.577 million
peoples
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people
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,
citizen
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citizens
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age
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15-39
was
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were
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the highest number among
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the other
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other
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another age group
other age groups
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age
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group, followed by those
who
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apply
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age
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40-64 at 1.331 and under 15 at 0.898 million people. Surprisingly, a year later in 2012, the trends of populations were alike with some minor rise and fall.
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those under 15 and 15-39 underwent
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a slighy
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slighy
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slightly
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dropped
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of 2-3
thousands peoples
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thousand people
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in 2012,
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other groups
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and
overall
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figures were on the rise. With regards to percentage changes, citizens
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age
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aged
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above 65
has
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have
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significant
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a significant
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increase
up
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of up
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to 4%.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "overall".
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 88%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words age with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "trends" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.
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