The following two pie charts give the results of a survey into the popularity of various leisure activities among European adults in 1985 and 1995. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The pie charts illustrate a survey result about what activities
that
European Correct pronoun usage
apply
adults
did during their free time in 1985 and 1995. Overall
, it can be seen that people
in the given period enjoyed watching TV the most.
In 1985, Most adults
spent their time to watch
TV which accounted for almost one-third of the share. Change the verb form
watching
Moreover
, people
interacting with friends and eating out accounted more
than 20%. Approximately 18% of Change preposition
for more
people
chose to talk with family members during leisure time. Meanwhile, 6% of adults
did other activities.
In 1995, the number of adults
who watched TV decreased slightly, but it remained the most popular activity with 30% of people
. Furthermore
, around a quarter of people
played computer games (27%) and ate at a restaurants
/cafe (26%). The Fix the agreement mistake
restaurant
amount
of Change the quantifier
number
adults
who talked to families dropped to only 8% and only 2% of people
had other activities.Submitted by ameliahanakaru01 on
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