The following two pie charts give the results of a survey into the popularity of various leisure activities among European adults in 1985 and 1995. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The following two pie charts give the results of a survey into the popularity of various leisure activities among European adults in 1985 and 1995. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie charts illustrate a survey result about what activities
that
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European
adults
did during their free time in 1985 and 1995.
Overall
, it can be seen that
people
in the given period enjoyed watching TV the most. In 1985, Most
adults
spent their time
to watch
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watching
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TV which accounted for almost one-third of the share.
Moreover
,
people
interacting with friends and eating out accounted
more
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than 20%. Approximately 18% of
people
chose to talk with family members during leisure time. Meanwhile, 6% of
adults
did other activities. In 1995, the number of
adults
who watched TV decreased slightly, but it remained the most popular activity with 30% of
people
.
Furthermore
, around a quarter of
people
played computer games (27%) and ate at a
restaurants
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restaurant
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/cafe (26%). The
amount
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number
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of
adults
who talked to families dropped to only 8% and only 2% of
people
had other activities.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words adults, people with synonyms.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Pie charts
  • Leisure activities
  • European adults
  • Survey results
  • Popularity
  • Comparison
  • Ten-year period
  • Walking
  • Cycling
  • Increase/Decrease
  • Percentage
  • Popularity shift
  • Team sports
  • Solitary activities
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