The chart below shows the number of household in the US by their annual income 1n 2007,2011 and 2015. summarize the information.

The chart below shows the number of household in the US by their annual income 1n 2007,2011 and 2015. summarize the information.
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The bar graph compares three different years in terms of
households
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' annual income. Incomes were divided into five brackets ranging from less than $25,000 to over $100,000.
Overall
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, the number of
households
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in every annual income
bracket
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rose.
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, The highest wage
bracket
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was dominant at the beginning and the end of the period,
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in 2011, the second wage
bracket
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was the most prevalent salary. In 2007, almost 30
million
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households
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earned $100,000 or more,
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generating between $25,000-$49,999 attracted just over 25
million
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families. In 2011, the majority of
households
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earned less than $50,000, with the %25,000-$49,999
bracket
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overtaking others. In the same year, the fifth
bracket
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fell slightly, to just over 25
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, before surpassing all the other brackets at well over 30
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at the end
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of the period. The number of
households
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earning between $50,000-$99,999 remained relatively stable over the given period, with around 20
million
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generating between $50,000-$74,999 annually. Meanwhile, a minority, around 15
million
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, allocated the third
bracket
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, $75,000-$99,999, to themselves.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words households, bracket, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "just over" was used 2 times.
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