The graph below shows the rate of smoking per 1000 people in Someland from 1960 to 2000. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information in the graph below.

The graph below represents the prevalence of smoking per 1000 people in Someland from 1960 to 2000. It is evident from the bar chart that, until 2000. In the 1960s,

women

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smoked less than men. But over time, the

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of

women

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who smoke has

go

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up.

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, the

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of male

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has decreased significantly. In 2000, smoking rates were equal between men and

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The

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of female

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uplift

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increased

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dramatically between 1960 and 1975.

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, it was in the same position in 1965 and 1970.

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, the

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of female

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in 2000

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went down compared to 1975. Between the 1960s and 1970s, the

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of male

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slide dramatically.The smoking prevalence among men and

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reached parity in 2000