The bar chart shows the scores of teams A, B and C over four different seasons. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The bar chart shows the scores of three
teams
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B
and Use synonyms
C
, in four consecutive seasons. It is evident from the chart that Use synonyms
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B
scored far higher than the other two Use synonyms
teams
over the seasons, though their score decreased as a whole over the period.
In 2002, the score of Use synonyms
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B
far exceeded that of the other two Use synonyms
teams
, standing at 82 Use synonyms
points
compared to only 10 for Use synonyms
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C
and a very low 5 for Use synonyms
team
A. Over the next two years, the Use synonyms
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team
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B
decreased quite considerably, dropping by around half to 43 by 2004, but they still remained above the Use synonyms
points
for the other Use synonyms
teams
.
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However
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C
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were lower, they were rising. Use synonyms
Team
A’s Use synonyms
points
had increased by 600% from 2002 to reach 35 Use synonyms
points
by 2004, nearly equal to Use synonyms
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team
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Team
B
. Use synonyms
Team
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C
, meanwhile, had managed only a small increase over Use synonyms
this
time.
In the final year, Linking Words
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B
remained ahead of the others as their Use synonyms
points
increased again to 55, Use synonyms
while
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team
A and Fix the agreement mistake
teams
C
saw their point scores reverse and drop to 8 and 5 respectively.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words teams, b, c, team, points with synonyms.
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