The bar chart shows the scores of teams A, B and C over four different seasons. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The bar chart shows the scores of teams A, B and C over four different seasons.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
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The bar chart shows the scores of three
teams
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, A,
B
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and
C
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, in four consecutive seasons. It is evident from the chart that
team
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B
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scored far higher than the other two
teams
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over the seasons, though their score decreased as a whole over the period. In 2002, the score of
team
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B
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far exceeded that of the other two
teams
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, standing at 82
points
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compared to only 10 for
team
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C
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and a very low 5 for
team
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A. Over the next two years, the
points
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for
team
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B
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decreased quite considerably, dropping by around half to 43 by 2004, but they still remained above the
points
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for the other
teams
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.
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, though
team
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A and
C
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's
points
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were lower, they were rising.
Team
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A’s
points
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had increased by 600% from 2002 to reach 35
points
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by 2004, nearly equal to
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team
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Team
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B
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.
Team
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C
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, meanwhile, had managed only a small increase over
this
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time. In the final year,
team
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B
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remained ahead of the others as their
points
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increased again to 55,
while
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team
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teams
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A and
C
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saw their point scores reverse and drop to 8 and 5 respectively.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 88%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words teams, b, c, team, points with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
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