The bar chart shows the scores of teams A, B and C over four different seasons. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The bar chart shows the scores of three
teams
, A, B
and C
, in four consecutive seasons. It is evident from the chart that team
B
scored far higher than the other two teams
over the seasons, though their score decreased as a whole over the period.
In 2002, the score of team
B
far exceeded that of the other two teams
, standing at 82 points
compared to only 10 for team
C
and a very low 5 for team
A. Over the next two years, the points
for team
B
decreased quite considerably, dropping by around half to 43 by 2004, but they still remained above the points
for the other teams
.
However
, though team
A and C
's points
were lower, they were rising. Team
A’s points
had increased by 600% from 2002 to reach 35 points
by 2004, nearly equal to team
Capitalize word
Team
B
. Team
C
, meanwhile, had managed only a small increase over this
time.
In the final year, team
B
remained ahead of the others as their points
increased again to 55, while
team
A and Fix the agreement mistake
teams
C
saw their point scores reverse and drop to 8 and 5 respectively.Submitted by shehzadarshad976 on
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