Image for topic: The chart below shows the expenditure of two countries on consumer goods in 2010.
The bar chart illustrates the amount of
money
spent on five consumer products including cars, computers, books, perfume and cameras
in two different countries
(France and UK
) in the year Correct article usage
the UK
of
2010. Units are measured in Change preposition
apply
pounds
sterling.
Overall
, the UK
spent most of the money
on consumer goods than France in the period of time. Both countries
spent most of their money
on Cars whereas
the least spent of money
was in
perfume in the Change preposition
on
Uk
Correct your spelling
UK
comapred
to Correct your spelling
compared
cameras
in France. Furthermore
, the significant difference in expenditure between two
Correct article usage
the two
countries
was on cameras
.
In terms of cars, people
of Correct article usage
the people
Correct article usage
the Uk
Uk
spent around 450,000 Correct your spelling
UK
pound
on Change to a plural noun
pounds
this
as opposed to the French at 350,000 Correct pronoun usage
them
pounds
. Similarly
, The british
was higher on books than Change the capitalization
British
French
(around 400,000 Correct article usage
the French
pounds
and 300,000 pound
respectively). In the Change to a plural noun
pounds
UK
, expenditure on cameras
was double (350,000 pounds
) than the amount spent in French
(150,000 Replace the word
France
pounds
)
On the other hand
, the amount of money
paid for the remaining products was higher in French
. Above 350,000 Replace the word
France
pounds
was spent by the french
on computers which was slightly more than Capitalize word
French
British
who spent exactly 350,000 Correct article usage
the British
pounds
. Neither of the countries
spent much on perfume which accounted for 200,000 pounds
of expenditure in French but under 150,000 pounds
in the UK
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Vocabulary: Replace the words money, cameras, countries, uk, pounds with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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