The pie charts below show the percentage of five kinds of books sold by a bookseller between 1972 and 2012.

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The pie chart gives information about the proportion of five different kinds of

books

sold by a bookseller between 1972 and 2012.

It is clear that

both

Adult

and

children’s

fiction

had an upward trend,

while

Biography,

Travel

and Others had a downward trend.

In addition

this

, the greatest change belonged to the genre of

Adult

fiction

over the period. In 1972,

Adult

fiction

children’s

and biography

books

had the same proportion, at 20%.

While

Other

books

were the highest, at 25%,

travel

books

were the lowest in

this

category.From 1972 to 1992,

Adult

fiction

had

Unnecessary verb

apply

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increased slightly, from 20% to 25%, became the highest.

Beside

Replace the word

Besides

show examples

children’s

fiction

and

travel

books

were climbed, from 20% to 22% and from 15% to 18% respectively.

By contrast

others

Correct quantifier usage

other

show examples

books

were

Unnecessary verb

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decreased significantly, from 25% to 20% In 2012,

Adult

fiction

books

saw the greatest

changed

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change

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, from 25% to 45%.

In addition

children’s

fiction

books

were increased from 22% to 25%.

However

, Others and

travel

books

were

Unnecessary verb

apply

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decreased dramatically, from 20% to 12% and from 18% to 10% respectively.

Beside

Correct your spelling

Besides

show examples

, biography

books

were fell

Change the verb form

fell

show examples

from 15% to 8%,

became

Wrong verb form

becoming

show examples

the lowest.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words books, adult, children’s, fiction, travel with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.

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