The pie charts below show the percentage of five kinds of books sold by a bookseller between 1972 and 2012.
The pie chart gives information about the proportion of five different kinds of
books
sold by a bookseller between 1972 and 2012.
It is clear that
both Adult
and children’s
fiction
had an upward trend,while
Biography, Travel
and Others had a downward trend. In addition
to this
, the greatest change belonged to the genre of Adult
fiction
over the period.
In 1972, Adult
fiction
, children’s
and biography books
had the same proportion, at 20%.While
Other books
were the highest, at 25%, travel
books
were the lowest in this
category.From 1972 to 1992, Adult
fiction
had
increased slightly, from 20% to 25%, became the highest.Unnecessary verb
apply
Beside
, Replace the word
Besides
children’s
fiction
and travel
books
were climbed, from 20% to 22% and from 15% to 18% respectively.By contrast
, others
Correct quantifier usage
other
books
were
decreased significantly, from 25% to 20%
In 2012, Unnecessary verb
apply
Adult
fiction
books
saw the greatest changed
, from 25% to 45%.Replace the word
change
In addition
, children’s
fiction
books
were increased from 22% to 25%.However
, Others and travel
books
were
decreased dramatically, from 20% to 12% and from 18% to 10% respectively.Unnecessary verb
apply
Beside
, biography Correct your spelling
Besides
books
were fell
from 15% to 8%, Change the verb form
fell
became
the lowest.Wrong verb form
becoming
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "in addition, while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words books, adult, children’s, fiction, travel with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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