image-preview The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities.

Summerise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart gives information about the proportion of dwellers in five
cities
such
as
Sydney
,
Melbourne
, Brisbane, Adelaide, and Hobart in Australia who bought fresh or
instant
coffee
and those who went to the
cafe
for drinking in
last
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the last
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four weeks.
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that in
the
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all
cities
, people prefer to go to a
cafe
with the exception of Adelaide.
However
,
while
the number of individuals who want
instant
coffee
was significantly more than fresh
coffee
in four
cities
, the difference is much lower in
Sydney
. The only
cities
where the participation levels differ greatly between
cafe
lovers and
instant
coffee
lovers are
Sydney
and
Melbourne
, which are far
popular
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with
cafe
lovers (with
the
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average of 63% as opposed to 46% in
Sydney
and
Melbourne
),
although
purchasing fresh
coffee
is the least popular activity (roughly 42% in both
cities
).
On the other hand
, the difference between going to
cafe
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a cafe
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and drinking
instant
coffee
is reduced (with
the
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average of 55% and 53% respectively) in
other
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the other
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three
cities
. Despite
this
, the average of people in these
cities
who have a tendency to purchase fresh
coffee
is much lower than
Sydney
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in Sydney
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and
Melbourne
.
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