The graph below shows that the hospitals admissions for five hospitals in a European country from 2004 to 2018
The line chart compares the number of weekly hospital
admissions
in Fortsmith, Adlin, Stanton , Bardley and Oxley which are the popular hospitals located in a European country, between 2004 and 2018.
Overall
, Oxley was the only hospital to see a decline in admissions
between the period
from 2004 to 2018. In contrast
, Adlin, Stanton and Bardley experienced a rise in hospital admissions
over the 14-year
period
. Oxely was unique in their admission figures remained stable over the period
.
In 2004 , the admission for Oxely Hospital was under 250 per week which drastically decreased to around 110 in the final year
. Meanwhile, Fortsmith's weekly hospital admissions
fluctuated at around 200 throughout the period
.
On the other hand
, the number of people admitted to Adlin Hospital rose dramatically from just over 100 in the first year
to reaching a peak of exactly 250 in the final year
. Likewise
, the hospital admissions
for Bardly and Satnton rose from over 100 in the first year
to 250 in the final year
and from under 100 to over 150 respectively.Submitted by rifataranawshin on
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