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There 2 maps of Paradise Island in the past and the present. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant

There 2 maps of Paradise Island in the past and the present. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant
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The two maps illustrate the changes that have occurred on Paradise
Island
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 over time, showing its transformation from a natural research area into a tourist destination. These maps highlight key developments and modifications that have taken place.
Overall
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, Paradise
Island
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 has transitioned from a primarily natural environment, where scientists once conducted research, into a recreational area for tourists.
Although
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 certain areas,
such
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 as the beach and natural spring, have remained unchanged, much of the
island
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 has been developed and modified. Notably, a hotel complex and swimming pool have replaced the former scientific research station and some of the surrounding trees.
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, an open-air restaurant, BBQ area, and café now stand in place of what was once dense tree coverage.
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, much of the natural environment has been replaced by leisure facilities.
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, several other parts of the
island
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 have undergone significant development. The pier has been expanded, and a cruise ship is now docked there, marking another notable change.
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 to the past, when swimming at the beach was prohibited, it is now allowed. A cycle path has
also
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 been introduced along the edge of the
island
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, adding to the new tourist-friendly infrastructure.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words island with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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