The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015.

The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual

income in 2007, 2011 and 2015.
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The chart bar illustrates critical information about the
number
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of
families
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families'
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yearly
income
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in the
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United
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State Of
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America in 3 various
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starts
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starting
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in 2007, 2011, and 2015.
This
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unite
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is measured in millions.
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, it is clear from the graph that 2015 is taking the majority of
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households
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household
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income
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.
While
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2007 and 2011 have nearly the same statistics of
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households
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household
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income
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.
According to
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the data, the biggest annual
income
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in the
year
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2015
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$100,00 or more and
having
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32
million
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households
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, and the second amount of many is $25,000-$49,999
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less than $25,000, and the
number
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of
households
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is 27 and 28
million
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respectively.
in
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the lowest
income
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in the
year
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of
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2015
is
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$75,000-$99,999 and
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the numbers
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numbers
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number
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of
the
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households
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is
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15
million
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. In terms of the
year
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2011 and 2007, the largest yearly
income
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in 2011,
2007
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and 2007
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is
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$25,000-$49,999 for the
year
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2011,
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also
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and also
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$100,000 or more for 2011. and the
number
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of
the
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household
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households
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is 29 and 29.5 respectively.
as well as
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$50,000-$74,999 and $75,000-$99,999
the
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they
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have the same
number
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of families about like 14 and 21.
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, the yearly
income
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of $100,000 in
the
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2011 is a bit below the 2007 in -1
million
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. and yearly
income
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of $25,000-$49,999 and less than $25,000 in the
year
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2007 is 25 and 27
million
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.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "as well as".
Vocabulary: Replace the words number, income, households, year, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Economic landscape
  • Household income
  • Economic health
  • Income brackets
  • Trends
  • Inflation
  • Unemployment rates
  • Job market
  • Income disparity
  • Housing affordability
  • Access to education
  • Quality of life
  • Economic policies
  • Income inequality
  • Mitigating
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