Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Environmental issues are increasing day to day. There are disputed opinions regarding environmental problems.

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, where some are of the viewpoint that endangered plants and wildlife are the most pivotal

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time,

whereas

others

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and claim that there are numerous crucial environmental issues.

Therefore

, before commenting on my opinion, both views

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the ensuing paragraphs. On the

one

hand, there are a plethora of reasons why some people believe that the loss of particular species of flora and fauna is the most dangerous

problem

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the environment. The most pivotal

one

is that it has a pessimistic impact on the food chain. By

this

, I mean that if any

one

species is extinct, which is

one

of the sources of food for other animals, it will develop a serious issue

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the natural food chain.

Furthermore

, another striking reason is that it has a negative effect on innovation or making medicine.

In other words

, some plants are essential to make some drugs.

On the other hand

, those who stand by the latter view have their own claims.

To begin

with, air pollution is an important

problem

in

this

era.

This

is because it is harmful

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human beings, and

also

the number of patients with lungs is rising with time.

One

good illustration is Delhi city; there is the highest number of

this

kind of patient

due to

air pollution.

Moreover

, the second important

problem

is chopping trees.

This

is the fact that there are two main problems,

such

as flooding and declining oxygen levels owing to reducing the number of trees. 

To sum up

and offer my position,

according to

the aforementioned points, it is clearly evident that both views have their importance.

However

, I firmly support the latter view rather than the former view because air and water pollution are very dangerous for human lives because of some

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, flooding,

as well as

increasing carbon dioxide.