The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities. • Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table below gives information about the underground railway 

systems in six cities.

• Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main 

features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The provided table compares six metropolises in terms of
railway
opening date,
kilometers
Change the spelling
kilometres
show examples
of route, and annual passengers.
Overall
,
Although
Correct article usage
the Lnondon
show examples
Lnondon
Correct your spelling
London
railway
is the oldest and the longest, Tokyo
overtake
Change the verb form
overtakes
show examples
it in the number of commuters per year. London Underground
railway
Capitalize word
Railway
show examples
which was established
at
Change preposition
in
show examples
1863,
while
, Paris station, opened 27 years later, has managed to attract 416 more travellers each year.
However
, Tokyo, the
tirth
Correct your spelling
birth
opened
railway
,
at
Change preposition
in
show examples
1927, overtakes all stations in terms of commuters, with 1927 passengers annually using
this
system. Los Angeles,
on the other hand
, is the newest
railway
, opened
at
Change preposition
in
show examples
2001, 20 years after Kyoto's
railway
was founded, and with 50 and 45 annual commuters respectively, they are the
least used
Add a hyphen
least-used
show examples
railway
stations. Looking at
railway's
Correct article usage
the railway's
show examples
lenght
Correct your spelling
length
in more detail, London overtakes all countries by 394
kilometers
Change the spelling
kilometres
show examples
lenght
Correct your spelling
length
. Paris'
railway
lenght
Correct your spelling
length
is half of
the
Correct article usage
apply
show examples
London
Change noun form
London's
show examples
.
Moreover
, with only 11
kilometers
Change the spelling
kilometres
show examples
Change preposition
in lenght
show examples
lenght
Correct your spelling
length
, almost half of Los Angeles, Kyoto is the shortest
railway
system.
Submitted by ghazalmoosavi79 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words railway, lenght with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

Ultimate Speaking practice for IELTS

Practice speaking step by step, answer real-life questions, and build your confidence. Start your free trial and improve your speaking skills today!
What to do next:
Look at other essays:

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

Learn how to write high-scoring essays with powerful words.
Download Free PDF and start improving you writing skills today!