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You recently spent a weekend with your friend in her/his new house. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, you should: •explain what you like about his new house •describe what you enjoyed most about your stay •suggest when and where you could meet next

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Dear Maninder, I hope
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 letter finds you in best of the spirits and radiant health. I am writing
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 letter to let you that I liked your new house a lot because of its modern and trendy architecture, which is a perfect blend of style and comfort.
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, the interior
designing
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 is
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 very attractive. There are so many good things about your house, but the
wood work
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woodwork
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,especially, the modular cupboards are the perfect example of
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the state
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state of the art
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 craftsmanship. Adding more to it, the
seesam
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seam
 wood furniture and finish it has is very beautiful.
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,
house
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the house
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 is equipped with
latest
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the latest
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 keyless locks,
modern
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a modern
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 kitchen and
latest
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 bath fittings are
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 worth praising. The vivid memories of our meet are still fresh in my mind and I would love to meet you again lately.
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, I would like to use
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 opportunity to invite you
on
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 my sister's wedding next month, because it will be a perfect occasion to stay together and enjoy the marriage festivities. I hope you will like
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 plan and I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours lovingly, Jatinder.

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organization
Consider splitting longer paragraphs to separate different ideas more clearly. This will help in maintaining a focused progression of ideas.
language
A few grammatical errors, such as 'let you know' instead of 'let you that', could be corrected for improved language accuracy.
tone
The letter includes a heartfelt greeting and closing, which adds warmth and personalization.
content details
You clearly expressed appreciation for the house and detailed specific features you admired, fulfilling the task requirements.
task completion
The letter invites the friend to another occasion, effectively suggesting when and where to meet next, which addresses the final part of the task.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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