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The tables below give the distribution of world population in 1950 and 2000, with an estimate of the situation in 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The tables below give the distribution of world population in 1950 and 2000, with an estimate of the situation in 2050. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The tables compare six regions in terms of
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population'
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 distribution over a 50-year period
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 and provide
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 for 2050.
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, the
world
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population
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 grew substantially in almost all regions, with Asia being the most populated continent.
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Europe
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population
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 declined from 1950 to 2000. The
world
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population
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 surged from a low of 2.5 billion in 1950 to 6 billion in 2000, and it is estimated to reach 9 billion by 2050. In 1950, over half of the
world
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's
population
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 resided in Asia, followed by
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, at just over two-fifths.
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, Oceania allocated less than 1% of the total
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. In 2000, Asian residents made up three-fifths, and Oceania remained the least-populated area with 1%.
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, Africa took the second spot with 13%,
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Europe
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's
population
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 almost halved compared to the prior five decades. It is predicted that with a 1% decrease in
Asian
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 populace, it will continue to dominate the
world
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population
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 in 2050, followed by Africa comprising 20%.
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decrease
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Europe
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 will fall behind Latin America at about 7% and 9% respectively. Interestingly, Oceania will be the only region with an unchanged figure.
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