There 2 maps of Paradise Island in the past and the present. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant

There 2 maps of Paradise Island in the past and the present.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant
The given maps demonstrate alternatives that happen for Paradise Island at two points in time namely, the past and now.
Overall
, it is important that the number of facilities in
this
area increase, and the scientific island alter to the tourist form.
According to
the pictures, the Rocks, the Beach, and the pier, which are around the Island are in the same position both times;
additionally
, now, the beach is used for swimming
permitted
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, and the pier sector climb
and
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near it has a cruise ship
instead
of the boat;
moreover
, near the rock, we can see the scenic lookout.
In addition
, today, around
this
region we can see the cycle path. The graphs illustrate that the natural spring has the same zone as the prior, but now near it are the cafe and roads. the green area, which was in the centre, has been replaced by an Open restaurant and the BBQ area.
Furthermore
, the woodland and the scientific research station, near each other, are changed by the Swimming pool and the hotel complex.
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