The table below gives information about consumer spending on different items in five different countries 2002

The table below gives information about consumer spending on different items in five different countries 2002
The table illustrates the percentage of
consumers
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expenditure
in Ireland, Italy, Spain, Sweden and
Turkey
on three different goods in 2002
Overall
, the category of consumer goods that all
countries
spent most was food, drinks and
tabacco
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tobacco
while
the least consuming category was leisure and education in all five
countries
. The outlay of
Turkey
was generally higher than the other four
countries
.
According to
the table,
Turkey
spent
most
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at 32.12% . The
expenditure
of Ireland was
also
high (28.91%) compared to
sweden
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Sweden
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which spent the least (15.77%). Spain and Italy spent 18.80% and 16.36% respectively.
On the other hand
, the lowest
expenditure
was on leisure and education which accounted for under 5% in all
countries
.
Turkey
spent most of these items at just 4.35% of their national
expenditure
which is
the
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double of
spain
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Spain
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(1.98%) . Clothing and footwear
was
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the third category of
consumers
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consumer
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goods and outlays for those items were between 9% in Italy and 5.40% in Sweden. The national spending in
this
area for the remaining
countries
averaged around 6.5%
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • consumer spending
  • items
  • countries
  • comparison
  • overview
  • table
  • data
  • information
  • proportion
  • percentage
  • figures
  • categories
  • expenditure
  • purchases
  • spending habits
  • trends
  • average
  • highest
  • lowest
  • variation
  • pattern
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