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The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The graph below shows average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The line graph compares average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in four countries over a
period
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 of 40
years
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. The line graph compares average carbon dioxide (CO2) emissions per person in four countries over a
period
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 of 40
years
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. It is clear from the line graph that Portugal and Italy went up over the
period
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,the United Kingdom and Sweden saw a decline between 1967 and 2007.
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,Sweden experienced a sharp growth between 1967 and 1977. In detail,the United Kingdom took the lead in carbon dioxide emissions per person in 1967,the figure decreased gradually from about 11 metric
tonnes
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 to 9 metric
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 from 1967 to 2007,
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 Sweden rose sharply from 9 metric
tonnes
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 in 1967 to 11 metric
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 in 1977,it slumped dramatically from 11 metric
tonnes
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 in 1977 to 5 metric
tonnes
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 in 2007. Meanwhile,the figure for Italy and Portugal saw a steady rise over a
period
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 of 40
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.Especially,there is a sharp increase from 1967 to 1997,Italy increased from 4 metric
tonnes
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 to 8 metric
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,and Portugal grew from 1 metric tonne to 5 metric
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.
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,they rose slightly in the
last
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 10
years
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words period, years, tonnes with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "compares" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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