The graph shows data about the annual earnings of three bakeries in London, 2000-2010

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of the three

bakeries

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in London, 2000-2010, a period of 10 years. In general,

Bernie’s

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Burns and Robbie's

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Bakery

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annual

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increased,

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Lovely’s

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Loaves

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decreased. In the period from 2000 to 2004, Lovely’s

Loaves

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had the highest annual

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than

Bernie’s

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Burns and Robbie’s

Bakery

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, amounting to about 80,000 and higher,

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Bernie’s

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Burns and Robbie's

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annual

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were no more than 20,000 and 60,000.

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, between 2004 and 2005, Lovely's annual

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declined steadily to 60,000,

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the

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of other

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began to rise gradually.

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, Robbie’s

Bakery

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had steady

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for several years

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but

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soared. And

Bernie’s

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Barns had the lowest annual

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among the three

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but grew gradually without sharp increases and decreases. The biggest contrast was the sharp drop in Lovely's

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Loaves

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earnings

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from 90,000 to 40,000 in six years

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lower than the rest of the

bakeries

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. In the period between 2008 and 2010, Robbie’s

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Bakery

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hit a peak, exceeding 100,000, which was even higher than Lovely’s

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Loaves

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in 2004.