The graph shows data about the annual earnings of three bakeries in London, 2000-2010

The graph shows data about the annual earnings of three bakeries in London, 2000-2010
The line graph compares the annual
earnings
of three bakeries in London between 2000 and 2010, a period of 10 years.
Overall
,the annual
earnings
of Lovely
Loaves
declined over the period,
whereas
the annual
earnings
of Bernie’s Buns and Robbie’s
Bakery
increased. In 2000,the most popular
bakery
in London was Lovely
Loaves
whose yearly income was about 80.000 a year.
This
was about 20.000 more than Robbie’s
Bakery
and four times more than Bernie’s Buns.
However
,apart from the brief rises again from 2003 to 2004 and from 2006 to 2007 , the annual
earning
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gradually declined over the
10 year
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timescale to finish at 40.000. In sharp contrast to
this
,the other two bakeries in London earned more per year.The annual
earnings
of Bernie’s Buns increased gradually until it overtook Lovely
Loaves
in 2007.It
then
increased from 2008 to 2010.The biggest rise in annual
earnings
was seen at Robbie’s
Bakery
as their annual income increased sharply
throughout
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from 2007 to 2008,exceeding the annual income of Lovely
Loaves
in 2001.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words earnings, loaves, bakery with synonyms.
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