The graph shows data about the annual earnings of three bakeries in London, 2000-2010

The line graph compares the annual

earnings

of the three

bakeries

in London, 2000-2010, a period of 10 years. In general,

Bernie’s

Burns and Robbie's

Bakery

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annual

earnings

increased,

while

Lovely’s

Loaves

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annual

earnings

decreased. In the period from 2000 to 2004, Lovely’s

Loaves

had the highest annual

earnings

than

Bernie’s

Burns and Robbie’s

Bakery

, amounting to about 80,000 and higher,

while

Bernie’s

Burns and Robbie's

Bakery

annual

earnings

were no more than 20,000 and 60,000.

However

, between 2004 and 2005, Lovely's annual

earnings

declined steadily to 60,000,

while

the

earnings

of other

bakeries

began to rise gradually.

In contrast

to

this

, Robbie’s

Bakery

had steady

earnings

for several years

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but

then

soared. And

Bernie’s

Barns had the lowest annual

earnings

among the three

bakeries

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but grew gradually without sharp increases and decreases. The biggest contrast was the sharp drop in Lovely's

Loaves

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earnings

from 90,000 to 40,000 in six years

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lower than the rest of the

bakeries

. In the period between 2008 and 2010, Robbie’s

Bakery

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annual

earnings

hit a peak, exceeding 100,000, which was even higher than Lovely’s

Loaves

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Loaf's

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annual

earnings

in 2004.