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Photographs are one of the best ways to save memories. In
this
digital age,
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of
smart phones
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passionate human beings to capture pictures and
due to
the importance of
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domain
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less popular. I partially agree with
this
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will be discussed in upcoming paragraphs. First and foremost, ease of accessibility is one of the primary reasons every second person has their personal mobiles with superior HD
camera
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.
Thus
, it diminishes the need
of hiring
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professional
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professionals
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or visit studios to get photos. As photoholic person take
picturesque
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the picturesque
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view
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views
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with the aid of
high quality
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cameras integrated into the
smart phone
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. To illustrate
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, here is an instance of
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conducted by
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the Global
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Market of Technology [GMOT] that
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90%
sales
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of
Iphones
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iPhones
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due to
an excellent megapixel of cameras.
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,
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of paid or unpaid editing apps and
softwares
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software
are available for download on the Apple store.
Moreover
, various sorts of visual effects and filters turn
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the basic portrait
to
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stunning
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a stunning
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view.
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advancement is able to reduce
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need
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highly qualified
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Furthermore
, market saturation is
also
the reason behind giving less publicity to the highly qualified studios. As millions of people share their amateur photography on
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social apps like Instagram or
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.
This
leads to
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situation for skilled
photojournalism
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photojournalists
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to stay in the market as their competitors can provide
at
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cheap offers or even free.
However
, there would be no comparison for
professional
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a professional
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eye on storytelling.
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comparison
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often lacks in
the
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casual
phototaking
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photo taking
photo-taking
. Artistic vision can capture
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and
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the theme
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of the snap.
For instance
, cinematographers are hired
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weddings that
makes
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diligent video clips including
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and
groom
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family members.
Consequently
, regardless of different online tools or superb
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cameras
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, professional photographers
differs
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differ
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from others
due to
the
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imagining power that they use in their work.
Overall
, undoubtedly experienced photographers
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with
unique
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a unique
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presentation of snaps and movies but I still believe that
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the accessibility
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of owning a phone diminishes the value
to hire
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renowned visual
artist
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.
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coherence cohesion
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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