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The graph below shows the average number of movies seen in a theater per year, by age group.

The graph below shows the average number of movies seen in a theater per year, by age group.
The line chart depicts the average count of
movies
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 watched in a cinema by 3 distinct
age
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 groups annually between 2000 and 2015. To commence, by 2000, individuals from
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age
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the age
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group
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 45-65 saw nearly 15
movies
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 in theatres per year,
whereas
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 those from the 25-44
age
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group
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 watched 12
movies
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 yearly, indicating a moderate disparity.
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, in 2010, these 2 figures plunged significantly, dipping to 12
movies
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 for the 45-65
age
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 classification, and approximately 7
movies
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 for the 25-44
age
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 classification.
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, by 2015, the frequency of films seen by people in the 45-65
age
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group
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 continued to reduce, falling to 4
movies
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 less compared to 2010.
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, those from the 25-44
age
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group
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 only viewed 5 films in 2015.
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, in 2000, people from the 18-24
age
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group
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 came 10 times to the theater in a year, before climbing to 12 times in 2005, and remained relatively stable until 2010. Notably, by 2015, the number of
movies
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 enjoyed by individuals from
such
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 an
age
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group
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 rose steadily, reaching an increase of 2 more
movies
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 than in 2005. To encapsulate,
while
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 the number of
movies
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 experienced by people from the 25-44 and 45-65
age
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 groups declined dramatically throughout the period, the figures from 18-24 experienced a remarkable surge.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words movies, age, group with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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