The line graph below shows changes in the amount and type of fast food consumed by Australian teenagers from 1975 to 2000. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph indicates the trends in the quantities
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of three types of fast food like pizza, hamburgers, fish, and chips by Australian teenagers between 1975 and 2000.
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Overall
, it is clear to see that the movement of hamburgers is in demand, while
, the amount of pizza is gradually increasing. Alternatively, fish and chips are significantly decreased.
To begin
with, fish and chips in 1975 were the most popular about 100% of consumption, in 1985, they are rising just 90% more than the year before. However
, after
this
moment it rarely , especially, in 1995 with it was only 50% and in 2000 dropped to 50%.
Furthermore
, in the starting period, pizza and hamburgers have similar value
with approximately, 10% of consumption. The greatest changes in the hamburger direction Fix the agreement mistake
values
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in 1985 when jump to 80% and in Change the verb form
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2000
in
shortly 100%. Change preposition
apply
Also
, slowly increased which around 10 to 25% in 1980 and 1985. In addition
, the largest changes
was in 2000 not far from 80%.Fix the agreement mistake
change
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