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Writing Samples
Band 8

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You and your family are living in rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter introduce yourself explain what is wrong with the furniture say what action you would like the landlord to take You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ................., You should write at least 150 words.

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Dear Landlord, I am Moazzam, writing
this
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 letter to express dissatisfaction regarding our living conditions in your home. I, with my family, moved here
last
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 month after renting it through Airbnb.
Although
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 the fresh paint makes the house quite appealing, the furniture is causing discomfort.
For example
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, a squeaking table
due to
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 its imbalance legs, 7 seater sofa is covered with dirt and stains which prevent us from using it. I read the description on the app before occupying it but
this
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 was not mentioned,
instead
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, it said that the house is clean and quiet.
Therefore
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, the reason for mentioning all these issues is to request you either replace the furniture or send it for maintenance. I will be very grateful to you if you can help us in
this
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 regard as early as possible because we are expecting a few close relatives in the upcoming week. If you need more details you can come over any day in the evening since I will be only available at that time of the day. Yours sincerely, Moazzam Maqsood

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Coherence and Cohesion
Try to address each piece of faulty furniture clearly to maintain coherency.
Task Achievement
Consider explaining how these issues affect your daily life for a more robust argument.
Task Achievement
The letter has a polite and respectful tone, which is ideal for a formal letter to a landlord.
Coherence and Cohesion
The structure of the letter is logical and easy to follow, enhancing clarity.
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