Zoos are sometimes seen as necessary but poor alternatives to a natural environment. Discuss some of the arguments for and against keeping animals in zoos?

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are usually regarded as

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place

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necessary to put wild

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inside.

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, some people may see these approaches as ineffective alternatives to the natural habitats of the

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.

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essay will discuss both perspectives regarding keeping

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in

zoos

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. First of all, keeping endangered

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in

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is important to monitor their activity and protect them from extinction. By letting the

animals

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roaming

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around the artificial environment in

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, they are being protected from both

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wildlife and illegal hunters, preventing them

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from being

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killed and

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extinct.

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that, by letting them live in

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, the process of mating is

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more efficient as it can be monitored easily and remotely by using surveillance cameras.

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, some people might disagree

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the idea of putting endangered

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in the

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because there are some reports regarding the lack of appropriate treatment given to those

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by the

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officers. Some

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are

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irresponsible

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in that

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they

are letting

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let

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the

animals

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starve for several days and

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lack

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a lack

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of hygiene

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their habitats. Aside from the irresponsibility of the

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, some visitors

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contribute to the lack of good treatment

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as when they are feeding plastic bags and soda cans to the

animals

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. If

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continues to happen, the

life

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lives

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of the

animals

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inside the

zoos

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will be threatened as their digestive system will be ruined. In conclusion, animal conservation in

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is mandatory to keep them

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protected from the harsh wildlife.

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,

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owners need to ensure the

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are given the appropriate treatment both

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the

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officers

as well as

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the visitors.