The bar chart shows the amount of energy generated by wind in four countries from 1985 to 2000
The bar chart provides information about the amount of wind-generated
energy
in four countries in a time period between 1985 and 2000.
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Initially
, India was the lowest producer of wind Linking Words
energy
, followed by the United Use synonyms
States
, with the other two countries falling in between. Use synonyms
At the
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end
of 2000, Denmark captured the position of the United Use synonyms
States
and became the highest producer of wind-generated Use synonyms
energy
.
In 1995, India produced the lowest amount of wind Use synonyms
energy
, 200 Use synonyms
megawatts
, compared to other producers. Use synonyms
Then
, the Linking Words
production
gradually increased, reaching 1200 Use synonyms
megawatts
by the Use synonyms
end
of 2000.
Germany clearly outperformed India, Use synonyms
initially
surpassing the Linking Words
5400 megawatt
mark in Add a hyphen
5400-megawatt
energy
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production
. It Use synonyms
also
demonstrated an improvement in Linking Words
production
, culminating in an Use synonyms
energy
output of over 800 Use synonyms
megawatts
.
From the beginning of the time period, the United Use synonyms
States
demonstrated dominance in Use synonyms
production
, reaching its highest capacity in 1990 with an enormous Use synonyms
production
of 1600 Use synonyms
megawatts
. Use synonyms
However
, the Linking Words
production
experienced some disruption towards the Use synonyms
end
of 2000, ultimately reducing to approximately 1500 Use synonyms
megawatts
.
Denmark held the second-lowest position at the beginning of the time period, with a Use synonyms
production
capacity of nearly 200 Use synonyms
megawatts
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However
, they significantly refined their strategy over the years. For that, the Linking Words
production
rate increased gradually, and Use synonyms
at the
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end
of 2000, the country became the table-topper with a Use synonyms
production
amount that was over 1600 Use synonyms
megawatts
—the same number the United Use synonyms
States
gained in 1990.Use synonyms
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