The bar chart shows the amount of energy generated by wind in four countries from 1985 to 2000
The bar chart provides information about the amount of wind-generated
energy
in four countries in a time period between 1985 and 2000.
Initially
, India was the lowest producer of wind energy
, followed by the United States
, with the other two countries falling in between. At the
end
of 2000, Denmark captured the position of the United States
and became the highest producer of wind-generated energy
.
In 1995, India produced the lowest amount of wind energy
, 200 megawatts
, compared to other producers. Then
, the production
gradually increased, reaching 1200 megawatts
by the end
of 2000.
Germany clearly outperformed India, initially
surpassing the 5400 megawatt
mark in Add a hyphen
5400-megawatt
energy
production
. It also
demonstrated an improvement in production
, culminating in an energy
output of over 800 megawatts
.
From the beginning of the time period, the United States
demonstrated dominance in production
, reaching its highest capacity in 1990 with an enormous production
of 1600 megawatts
. However
, the production
experienced some disruption towards the end
of 2000, ultimately reducing to approximately 1500 megawatts
.
Denmark held the second-lowest position at the beginning of the time period, with a production
capacity of nearly 200 megawatts
. However
, they significantly refined their strategy over the years. For that, the production
rate increased gradually, and at the
end
of 2000, the country became the table-topper with a production
amount that was over 1600 megawatts
—the same number the United States
gained in 1990.Submitted by jisan.path1506605 on
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