The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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from the

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cane.

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, the whole operation consists of seven procedures which will be fully described in the following from growing the plant to drying and cooling to produce the

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. To commence,

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canes are grown and nourished within 12 to 18 months which are

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harvested either by harvesting vehicles or manpower. Normally, harvesting by mankind would be more time-consuming.

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, the harvested

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canes are crushed in a specific machine with a pair of wheels spinning which produces the

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sugary juice.

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, a funnel-shaped limestone filter is used to purify the liquid. The filtrates are

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evaporated into syrup by continuous heating in a giant jar. After that, the heated syrup undergoes centrifugation that isolates the

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crystals from the syrup.

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, the separated

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crystals

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are put into a tank for drying and cooling and

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to turn

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into

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edible

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which is well-packed and is

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distributed not only in supermarkets but

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in the

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stores.