The graph below shows a typical American and a Japanese office. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows a typical American and a Japanese office. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given maps demonstrate the typical of not only
Japanese
but
also
American workplaces.
Overall
, it is important that the number of rooms in the American type is more than the
Japanese
method;
moreover
, Americans
instead
of
Japanese
have their own section.
According to
the
Japanese
office, we can see the
department
manager
, at the head of the place, and big windows, for the
Department
manager
.
In addition
, two sections of managers, at the bottom of the
department
manager
, has 6 employees;
furthermore
, workers have desks around the section
manager
. The American chart illustrates that two windows are on the left and the right of the building;
additionally
, the printer copier, storage, and 2 several conference rooms,are on the left and next to the window;
then
two different sections of managers and
department
manager
, where in the left next to the window. In the centre of the place, the office has 8 various parts for workers.
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