The graph below shows a typical American and a Japanese office. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows a typical American and a Japanese office. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given maps demonstrate the typical of not only
Japanese
but
also
American workplaces.
Overall
, it is important that the number of rooms in the American type is more than the
Japanese
method;
moreover
, Americans
instead
of
Japanese
have their own section.
According to
the
Japanese
office, we can see the
department
manager
, at the head of the place, and big windows, for the
Department
manager
.
In addition
, two sections of managers, at the bottom of the
department
manager
, has 6 employees;
furthermore
, workers have desks around the section
manager
. The American chart illustrates that two windows are on the left and the right of the building;
additionally
, the printer copier, storage, and 2 several conference rooms,are on the left and next to the window;
then
two different sections of managers and
department
manager
, where in the left next to the window. In the centre of the place, the office has 8 various parts for workers.
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