The bar chart shows the number of times per week (in 1000s), over five weeks, that three computer packages were downloaded from the internet. ▪️Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given bar chart illustrates how many
times
three packages including ActiveX
, Java, and Net were downloaded during a week
from the internet over five weeks
.
Overall
, it is clear that
ActiveX
experienced the highest level of downloading times
in each week
and also
, Net had witnessed the lowest number of downloads in all those weeks
.
Downloading ActiveX
has shown a gradual increase during these five weeks
which stood at 120 times
in the last
week
. It is noteworthy that a smooth decrease can be seen in the fourth week
. Although
in all weeks
, ActiveX
had first rank, a wide disparity was shown between ActiveX
and Net in the third week
which ActiveX
was downloaded six times
more than Net.
Java illustrated a progressive increase over this
period which stood at 80 in the fifth week
which was twofold more compared white first
Correct article usage
the first
week
. Net, on the other hand
, had shown a fluctuation with upward trend. Although
Net had experienced a substantial decrease of about 10, It had increased dramatically by 60 in the following week
.Submitted by Maral.qanbarii1992 on
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