The table gives information about rail transport in four countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The data displays on rail transport across four countries(
Japan
, China, India, and France), covering three main aspects: the annual number
of passengers
( in millions), rail network length( in kilometres
), and the number
of employees working on rail transport.
The country where there most passengers
are the
is Correct article usage
apply
Japan
, It has 24.5 billion people per year
. Additionally
, the country also
boasts a high passenger kilometres
per capita, with each individual travelling an average of 3,400 kilometres
annually. Furthermore
, Japan
carries a substantial volume of tonnes per year
, reaching 31 million. On the other hand
, France has the lowest number
of passengers
per year
, with 1.8 billion, however
, this
country has significantly
lowest Correct article usage
the significantly
carryis
of tonnes per Correct your spelling
carry is
carries
year
, at 63 million, respectively.
Turning to the two countries, which have a slightly similar number
of passengers
, China has a considerably lower number
of passengers
per year
, amounting to 3.6 billion. However
, the passenger kilometres
per capita in China are relatively higher compared to other countries, with an average of 1,019 kilometres
per person. Moving on to India, the passenger kilometres
per capita are relatively lower compared to Japan
, with an average of 1,178 kilometres
per person.
In conclusion, Japan
stands out with the highest number
of passengers
and tons carried. French While
, they have lower figures for passengers
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