The table gives information about rail transport in four countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The table gives information about rail transport in four countries.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
The data displays on rail transport across four countries(
Japan
, China, India, and France), covering three main aspects: the annual
number
of
passengers
( in millions), rail network length( in
kilometres
), and the
number
of employees working on rail transport. The country where there most
passengers
are
the
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is
Japan
, It has 24.5 billion people per
year
.
Additionally
, the country
also
boasts a high passenger
kilometres
per capita, with each individual travelling an average of 3,400
kilometres
annually.
Furthermore
,
Japan
carries a substantial volume of tonnes per
year
, reaching 31 million.
On the other hand
, France has the lowest
number
of
passengers
per
year
, with 1.8 billion,
however
,
this
country has
significantly
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lowest
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carries
of tonnes per
year
, at 63 million, respectively. Turning to the two countries, which have a slightly similar
number
of
passengers
, China has a considerably lower
number
of
passengers
per
year
, amounting to 3.6 billion.
However
, the passenger
kilometres
per capita in China are relatively higher compared to other countries, with an average of 1,019
kilometres
per person. Moving on to India, the passenger
kilometres
per capita are relatively lower compared to
Japan
, with an average of 1,178
kilometres
per person. In conclusion,
Japan
stands out with the highest
number
of
passengers
and tons carried. French
While
, they have lower figures for
passengers
.
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