The chart below shows the top ten countries with the highest spending on travel in 2014. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. Consumer Spending on Travel (US $ Billion)

The chart below shows the top ten countries with the highest spending on travel in 2014.

Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should write at least 150 words.

Consumer Spending on Travel (US $ Billion)
The bar chart shows ten countries, where
consumers
spent the highest amounts of
money
for travelling in 2014. From the
chart
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chart,
show examples
it is clearly seen that the largest consumer spendings were observed in China,
while
in Taiwan
consumers
spent the least. Studying the chart in more
detailed
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detail
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, it can be seen that
consumers
in China spent 110
billion
USD
for
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on
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travelling, followed by the United States and Germany (82
billion
USD
each). The
consumers
in the United Kingdom spent significantly less - approximately 54
billion
USD
. The least spendings were observed in India, Malaysia and Taiwan (15
billion
USD
, 12
billion
USD
and 9
billion
USD
respectively). In summary, comparing
top
Correct article usage
the top
show examples
ten countries it can be seen that the largest amount of
money
for
Change preposition
on
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travelling
were
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was
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spent in four countries, with the difference between the largest amount of
money
spent and the least amount of
money
spent
is
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being
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more than 100
billion
USD
.
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Vocabulary: The word "amounts" was used 4 times.

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